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I am standing:
alone
cold
unfeeling

In a place of:
darkness
solitude
and despair

Wondering if:
someone
anyone
or no one

Will save me from this:
life
death
existence

No one cares enough to see my:
tears
hurt
pain

But they notice enough to see my:
scars
of past
and present

So I'll continue to wait:
cold
alone
unfeeling

As I stare into this:

Dismal Grey Sky
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Author's Comments

Not really one of my better writings, but more of a spur of the moment kind of thing. :)

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:iconblackandbluebunny:
*flashlights on you*

Sarah! I'ma comin to saaaaave youuu!!!!! *tackleglomps* :glomp:
I like the...layout, is it? How you did the spaces and the...hey, if you look at the words from a distance, it kinda looks like a person...cool...
:iconblue-wolf69:
wow....a person eh???hehe. u wacko. watcha do? stare at this for a hour? lol LOVE U BECKY!

--
My heart is sick and sad.
From where the sun now stands,
I will fight no more
forever.
:iconblackandbluebunny:
LOVE U TOO SARAHHHH!!!! <3333
:iconkiomynightmare:
Wow, I've never seen poetry put like this, it awsome!

--
Never base your self worth on some elses opinion.
:iconcrazylunie:
How can you say you can't write. That was bueatiful.
:iconludicrous-thought:
Hn, I like how the words were separated with such space...it puts emphasis on the emotions.

and then on a nitpicky sidenote: of past and presant : It's spelled "present."
(I'm so picky about spelling...sorry. ^^; )

--
"Being an author is like being in charge of your own personal insane asylum." -Graycie Harmon

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:iconblue-wolf69:
o please! you are so picky. how do you know i didnt mean to spell it presant??? hehe (yeah...your right, i cant spell...hehe)

--
My heart is sick and sad.
From where the sun now stands,
I will fight no more
forever.

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